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              15. We must reject your complaints regarding the quality of the items we shipped to you.
                  After a thorough examination, we find that the merchandise is identical to the sample
                  you sent us when placing the order. Would you please check the shipment more.
              16. We would like to ask you if you are interested in representing our firm in your country.
              17. May I suggest that I come to see you on… so we can discuss all outstanding matters.
                  I presume, you will reimburse me for all expenses covered by proper receipts.
              18. We agree to your suggested visit on …
              19. May I mention that now I represent some of the better-known companies…
              20. We regret having to inform you that we are forced to cancel our contract which was
                  dated … We have ceased all export shipments to … We wish to thank you for the
                  excellent cooperation you have given us.
              21. We would like very much to express our appreciation for the friendly reception you
                  gave … We wish to confirm the arrangements whereby Mr X will visit us in May for
                  further discussions. We wish to assure you that Mr X will be considered our guest for
                  the duration of his visit.
              22. We wish to congratulate you and offer our best wishes on the 10  anniversary of your
                                                                                     th
                  firm we would like to take this advantage to thank you for your pleasant cooperation
                  over these years.
              23. We wish to announce that we have opened a sales office in… We would be pleased if
                  you would take full advantage of our services. We fully guarantee the quality of our
                  products.
              24. Mr X is fully authorized to act in the firm's name.
              25. We would like to suggest a commission of 10%. Please let us know if you agree to
                  our suggested commission.
              26. After discussing the details, I wish to confirm the reservations for the convention as
                  follows…

              3.  Analyse the structure of the following letters. What devices are used to make them polite?

              Elements of                                          A Letter
              Analysis
              Attention-getter      For the attention of the Sales Manager

              Salutation            Dear Sir or Madame,

              Acknowledge           Thank you for your inquiry of  November 5.
              inquiry
              Inform about price    We have enclosed our winter catalogue and price-list.
              - lists/ catalogues
              Draw attention to     Though we will see we offer a wide selection of watches, may we
              goods                 draw your attention to pp.30-35 which we think might suit the market
                                    you are dealing with?
              Mention               As  you  are  probably  aware,  all  our  products  are  fully  guaranteed
              reputation/           and backed by our world-wide reputation.
              guarantees
              Encourage further     If there is any further information you require, please contact us.
              contact
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