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  INCORRECT  (compound  subject): The  music  teacher  from
                                  your  high  school,  and  the  football  coach  from  mine  are
                                  married.
                                INCORRECT (compound object): Jeff told me that the job was
                                  still available, and that the manager wanted to interview me.
                           4.After  the  main  clause  when  a  dependent  (subordinate)  clause
                           follows it (except for cases of extreme contrast).
                                INCORRECT: The  cat  scratched  at  the  door,  while  I  was
                                  eating.
                                CORRECT: She  was  still  quite  upset,  although  she  had  won
                                  the Oscar. (This comma use is correct because it is an example
                                  of extreme contrast)

                           13  Explain the use of commas in the following text.
                                  “Working with local staffing and competency development is
                           not  new  to  Maersk  Drilling,  but  a  natural  part  of  its  value  set  and
                           growth ambitions”, Steve Thorley, Rig Manager on Heydar Aliyev in
                           Azerbaijan, explains.Seven Azerbaijani employees began their careers
                           on  the  mid-water  semi-sub,  Heydar  Aliyev,  offshore  Baku  in  the
                           Caspian  Sea,  but  now  work  globally  in  Maersk  Drilling’s  fleet.  In
                           Maersk Drilling all  employees  have equal opportunities to pursue a
                           career in a different country - no matter their position or title. The six
                           Azerbaijani  employees  who  currently  work  internationally  hold
                           positions  such  as  Subsea  Engineer,  Driller,  Electronic  Technicians,
                           Procurement Manager, etc.
                                  Hidayat  Mammadov  from  Azerbaijan  began  his  career  in
                           Maersk  Drilling  on  Heydar  Aliyev  in  2003.  Today,  11  years  later,
                           Mammadov works as a Subsea Engineer on Maersk Drilling’s brand
                           new drillship, Maersk Venturer, which has just commenced operations
                           in Malaysia. “This is a great opportunity for everyone to wider their




















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